As things stand at the moment, here's the copy I've come up with:
Once, Mariah was a warrior hero who saved her Half-Elven people.
Now, she’s shunned … by the ruler, who was once her comrade-in-arms.
Abandoned … by her ring-mate, who disappears to spy on their southern enemies.
Alone … when pirates leave her daughter at death’s door.
Now, is the time for Mariah to belt on her sword again and seek vengeance.
Taking Vengeance by M. K. Theodoratus [www.half-elven.com]
Available from WolfSinger Publications in May (?) 2011.
[list of where available to come later]
I'm sure the script is too long, but I could drop the first sentence. Still, it's the best I can do from all the tips I've gleaned from the 1st Turning Point blog site, always your site for lots of tips on promoting your books. I'm just glad my NYC daughter's Christmas present was doing the trailer for YouTube.
Hey. If you have any suggestions on how I might improve the script, I'd appreciate hearing them.